Stories of the lost souls

Okay, so this is the new universe.

Sebastian, Ian and Liam are best friends since their childhood. They were doing everything together. They were inseparable. Before that evening. These three guys were wondering about the life after the death, because Sebastian, the oldest one, told them about something he saw right after he almost drowned in the river about month ago. Liam and Ian thought it’s a real adventure to try something what happened to Ian. Ian actually thought, it’s not a really great idea, but he agreed. They all were about 14 when they tried it.
They went to a lake just outside the town. Unfortunately, Sebastian had to take a care about his little sister, Rebecca, so he just told her to go with them. Guys weren’t really happy about that. They didn’t like Becca. She was a strange kid. She still talked to herself, but she was always saying that she’s talking to some friends. So, when they were at the lake, they went to a pier, joked about something and finally - jumped to water.
Rebecca stood there, looking around, thinking about them, they’re just fools. But when no one didn’t swim out to take a breath, ten years old Becca started to worry about her older brother. After a while, when she screamed their names, she turned around a talked to somebody, but nobody was there. The thing was - Rebecca could see all the ghosts and demons. She begged them to save her brother and his friends. And finally - they listened her. They did it.
But, when Sebestian, Ian and Liam were safe - they weren’t quite themselves. Ghosts found them already half-dead. So half of them, had the ghosts’ personalities and skills. That evening ended with a big fight between them.
Since that day, they didn’t talk to each other. They couldn’t say it to anybody. Finally they didn’t take Becca like a little unuseful kid. But they had to deal with that. Each one of them, in their own way. Sebastian started to be a loner, Ian moved with his family after a few months and Liam started to be a big friend with Becca, because he couldn’t be alone.
Everything was fine this way. Everyone thought it’s a past. But one day, Ian came back with his family, they all were 20 already (Becca was 17), when they saw each other again. But they didn’t even say “hi" to each other. But then, weird things started to happen. Guys noticed that they’re not like the others. That they have a weird skills.
Just like Becca had one skill- she could talk to demons, ghosts and use them. And that’s what brought them back together, because they didn’t want it, so they’re trying to find a way how to be normal again, how to find their lost souls.

I think I will write a story about it, but I don't know if I should translate it to English, would somebody read it over there?

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